My first quality blog post.

LI- I was trying to... Independently draw upon a variety of planning strategies for writing tasks.Deliberately create text that explore my own point of view and experiences. Constantly use language features to extend meaning and engage an audience

My Success Criteria- Independently revise and make changes to my writing for impact and purpose.Use effective language to make the reader engaged.

Persuasive Writing- Smoking

My Profile

Hi my name is Perez. I am from Whangara Gisborne. The tribes I am from are Tuhoe, Ngati Konohi and Rongowhakaata. My favourite sports are football, gymnastics and sometimes touch rugby. In my family I have my brother, my dad, my mum and me. The school that I go to is called Te Hapara School.

I think I am a focused learner at my school because I am good at maths and reading. I enjoy reading because I can do tasks that I enjoy working with. My challenges are in maths sometimes because we work with decimal numbers. My goal for this year is to get better at writing and make sure I all my punctuation is right and I have the right things in the right place.

Something I am looking forward to this year is… the school camp for this year. I am also looking forward to hopefully going to Australia near the end of the year. Somebody who inspires me is Parris Goebel because she is a strong and independent woman who doesn’t listen to what others say.